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Sweet Admirer


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It was a new day of Gakuen High , you were sitting in class listening to the teacher , while listening you couldn't help but look at your crush , Berwald , though people may get the wrong impression you knew he was a sweet guy , you snapped out of your daydreams when someone poked you in the back , it was Alfred "Hey Tino sent this" Alfred said giving you a piece of paper , you took it from him , the piece of paper said 'you have a crush on Berwald I'm correct' you blushed at this , you then turned around to Tino who was now smiling and waving to you , you said no in lip service while blushing and he said yes , this carried on until the teacher caught you both ...

Le skip ....

You sighed as you went to your locker , Tino has been teasing you about Berwald he even sang the sitting in the tree song , you sighed again opening your locker , you got a surprise when millions of rose petals started coming out of your locker , soon you were buried  under rose petals , luckily there wasn't anyone around ( they went to there dorms ) otherwise you'd been stared at , you finally popped your head out of the petals and inhaled air as if you came for under water , you coughed up some petals "What the" you stopped in the mid of your sentence when you saw gifts , you went to your locker and took out a gift "I wonder who gave this?" you said , you read the card "From your secret admirer" it said and you blushed , whoever this secret admirer was you were dieing to find out .

The next day ....

You and your friends Elizabeta , Bella , Mitchele (She needs love too) and Ammaarah (The writer of this story ) went to ask all the guys in the school who did it   , unfortunately none of them did it  , "and that was all of them " Ammaarah said " Wait , wait ,wait Ammaarah" Bella said "We didn't ask Berwald " Your face heated up "Bella's right lets go" "NO,NO,NO,NO,NO,NO,NO !!!!!"You stopped Elizabeta in her sentence , the girls looked at you , you turned red " I mean you guys did a lot why don't you guys take a break ?" you said to them "NO WAY ! We want to know who your crush is too" Mitchele said and you blushed even more "No it's fi""oh I get it !" Bella stopped you in your sentence , she came up to you "You have a crush on Berwald ~" She said smirking "OOOOHHHHH ~" The rest said , you looked ready to explode from embarrassment so you ran "_____ ! WAIT WE DIDN'T MEAN TO MAKE YOU ANGRY " Mitchele said but you ran so fast all you could see was dust

Le AWESOME Prussia skip ...

You running lead you to school (you were outside your dorms) , your heavy breathing turned into light pants , you started walking around the school wherever your feet took you , suddenly you came past your locker , there was a note on the locker that caught your attention , you took the note and started reading it
' I get butterflies, every time,
You look at me, touch me, talk to me.
Big cheesy smiles across my face,
You fill that empty place,
Deep in my heart,
Where it has been lonely for such ..........(I don't own the poem)'

You blushed and smiled at the poem you read the bottom and it said 'Jag älskar dig'
You then new who this came from , you turned the card and this time it said 'turn around'
you turned around to see Berwald with a sweet smile and holding a bouquet of flower's , you blushed and took the flowers , you smelt them , they were sweet smelling flowers "Thank you" you said smiling , he didn't say anything he just came closer and before you knew it you were both kissing , you finally broke apart "Jag älskar dig" he said and you smiled " I love you too" you replied and started kissing when *SNAP* You both broke apart and turned to your side , there you saw the Nordics and your friends that you ran away all with camera's and phones " THIS IS O GOING TO FACEBOOK !" Mathias Exclaimed , you were about to kill him when Berwald stopped and said "If y'r go'in t p't it 'on m'ke su'r t s'ays m' w'fe " Berwald said "Sure what ever" Mathias replied "Say cute couple" Finland said and they took a picture again

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elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Denmark:You better not hit me bitch
Me:OH NO YOU JUST DIDN'T SAY WHAT I THINK YOU SAID NU UH YOU BETTER START RUNNING CAUSE IMA KILL YOU NOW:yeehaw: Dance lessons :tatatatatatatatatata: District 9: ARC gun Gun Tard :pew: Axl Emote Rambo 
Denmark::BombingEscape: Sonic Battle run Knuckles run Running Man 
hetalia524 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
run denmark RUN !!!!
If Denmark even dared to put it on Facebook, I would probably tackle him to the ground and demand he removes it. Every time he says no, he gets slapped across the face. XD I love the story! So cute! :iconitssofluffyplz:
hetalia524 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Me : Thank chu ~! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

Denmark : pssshhh yeah right *uploads to facebook*
NO, DAMN YOU, DENMARK! *jump tackles him to the ground, slapping the hell out of his perfect face* I often find myself looking at a person and going, "What a backpfeifengesicht." XD I love that word. I also quite like 'Schadenfreude'. ^J^
hetalia524 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Denmark : WHAT THE FU---- !!!!
DON'T YOU DARE FINISH THAT WORD, MISTER! *continues slapping him* There. I think I've made my point. :iconeweplz:
hetalia524 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Denmark : *unconcious*
NOW'S MY CHANCE! *slaps him with fish* I've always wanted to do that. :iconeweplz: *grabs Danish bacon and waves it in his face* He'll probably wake up soon.
bribri1230 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
BTW sweden just calls finland his wife cuz he cooks n cleans like one....OR SO DO MEN THINK!!!@
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